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Roxas

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Keyblade

Post by Roxas on Wed Dec 30, 2015 10:12 am

Name ;; Keyblade
Rank ;; A
Price ;;
Hilt:Chakra Enhanced Steel-550
Blade: Chakra enhanced steel- 500
SC- Jutsu Able - 150
SC- Chakra Absorbtion- 1000
SS-2500
A-750
A-750
A-750
Total cost:
7950 Ryo
Durability ;; 100
Description/Abilities;;

Keyblade Logic(SS rank)(Weap Aug):
The keyblade is powered by the users ability to handle the keyblade, when the user has Bukijutsu this sword has +5 strength and when they are not trying to kill this keyblade will only act as a blunt object, when the wielder wishes the Sword makes no physical mark however will make internal damage such as stabbing, slashing, and hacking up to 5 inches in on contact beneath skin.Passive.

Only for Chosen(A Rank):
Only a true Chosen my wield any more than one keyblade, if one attempts to wield two the swords will cause the wielder to enter a 2 post coma.If the blade is sheathed he will be fine and will not be passed out.(This only applies to key blades, the user may wield other weapons or shields with this so long as it's not a keyblade)

Jutsu powers(C-A):
The sword is engraved with fuuin symbols, when the seals are pressed the user may use any jutsu with the element the user has already obtained, this said all Jutsu are give +10 power when casted as the chakra enhanced blade gives off a potent chakra pressure that is absorbed into the jutsu itself.(May only cast C-A rank jutsu, and cool downs still apply, this sword doesn't have a cooldown for this ability).

Chakra Absorbtion(A):
The key blade is powerful and able to absorb jutsu who's power is not over 75, the sword is able to absorb up to A rank jutsu, the jutsu is converted into a stat boost as the chakra would go to the user's arms legs and torso, hence forth every jutsu absorbed gives the Blade +15 durability, as all the jutsus chakra is put into these areas I.E Blade and hilt due to the chakra refining the blade. (All stats are removed after the thread), the user is only able to use this to absorb 2 A rank jutsu(To break down the amount: 3 B rank, 4 C, or 5 D) the sword is simply able to absorb oncoming attacks hence forth this blade CAN NOT absorb much earth style jutsu unless making contact with the front of the blade.(Boost only applies once, duration of 3 posts, cool down of 2)

Mark Of Destiny(A Rank):
The user is covered in a blue over glow and his eyes are turned deep sea blue, the blade gives the user the ability to see if the user is pure of heart, the blade must simply be put to another persons chest, the user twists the key and either a white or black light orb will come out on the keyblade.Passive.



Appearance ;;

The blade is 4 feet long, the hilt is 8 inches, the blade's width is 2 inches, the key part is 6 inches.

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Asuna Nora

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Location : Kazan

Re: Keyblade

Post by Asuna Nora on Wed Dec 30, 2015 6:50 pm

Roxas wrote:Name ;; Keyblade
Rank ;; A
Price ;;
Hilt:Chakra Enhanced Steel-550
Blade: Chakra enhanced steel- 500
SC- Jutsu Able - 150
SC- Chakra Absorbtion- 1000
SS-2500
A-750
A-750
A-750
Total cost:
7950 Ryo
Durability ;; 100
Description/Abilities;;

Keyblade Logic(SS rank)(Weap Aug):
The keyblade is powered by the users ability to handle the keyblade, when the user has Bukijutsu this sword has +5 strength and when they are not trying to kill this keyblade will only act as a blunt object, when the wielder wishes the Sword makes no physical mark however will make internal damage such as stabbing, slashing, and hacking up to 5 inches in on contact beneath skin.Passive.

Only for Chosen(A Rank):
Only a true Chosen my wield any more than one keyblade, if one attempts to wield two the swords will cause the wielder to enter a 2 post coma.If the blade is sheathed he will be fine and will not be passed out.(This only applies to key blades, the user may wield other weapons or shields with this so long as it's not a keyblade)

Jutsu powers(C-A):
The sword is engraved with fuuin symbols, when the seals are pressed the user may use any jutsu with the element the user has already obtained, this said all Jutsu are give +10 power when casted as the chakra enhanced blade gives off a potent chakra pressure that is absorbed into the jutsu itself.(May only cast C-A rank jutsu, and cool downs still apply, this sword doesn't have a cooldown for this ability).

Chakra Absorbtion(A):
The key blade is powerful and able to absorb jutsu who's power is not over the durability of this blade, the sword is able to absorb up to A rank jutsu, the jutsu is converted into a stat boost as the chakra would go to the user's arms legs and torso, hence forth every jutsu absorbed gives the user +20 Strength, speed, and durability(All stats are removed after the thread), the user is only able to use this to absorb 2 A rank jutsu(To break down the amount: 3 B rank, 4 C, or 5 D) the sword is simply able to absorb oncoming attacks hence forth this blade CAN NOT absorb much earth style jutsu unless making contact with the front of the blade.

Mark Of Destiny(A Rank):
The user is covered in a blue over glow and his eyes are turned deep sea blue, the blade gives the user +20 to all stats with the mark of the chosen, this casts as long as this blade stays in the user's hand and the user has bukijutsu(Kenjutsu) as a spec.User gains a heart shaped symbol on his hand that he wields this keyblade.



Appearance ;;

The blade is 4 feet long, the hilt is 8 inches, the blade's width is 2 inches, the key part is 6 inches.

Spoiler:

Denied for the following reasons:

1. Chakra Absorption should be changed as it the buff is currently too strong, giving a +20 to three separate stats twice if the wording is correct? Even temporarily, this is a rather large boost and is made even moreso by my second point coming after this one.

It is also noteworthy to say that it is a bit over-powered to allow the blade to absorb anything of 100 and below, even if the stipulation is given on Earth Techniques, But I am willing to look it over again once you fix the wording and perhaps flesh it out a bit more.

2. The +20 to all stats when wielding the blade should also be removed due to the fact you already have a stat increasing ability and adding them to all stats makes little to no sense even speaking with the mechanics of the weapon.

Once you have made the necessary changes, contact me for further review.
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Asuna Nora

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Re: Keyblade

Post by Asuna Nora on Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:05 pm

Items have been fixed - Approved until further notice.

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