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Cadis Etrama Di Levone

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Susanoo

Post by Cadis Etrama Di Levone on Wed Dec 16, 2015 11:07 am

Name ;; Susano'o 
Rank ;; S(SS)
Type ;; Ninjutsu
Element ;; N/A
Range ;; Self
Power ;; 5(-)
Speed ;; 5(5)
Cool Down;; 10
Description ;;

Spoiler:
When activated, Susanoo forms around the user and becomes an extension of their will, acting and attacking on their behalf. By default, Susanoo is anchored to its user and they to it: in its less developed forms it will move around with the user; in its more completed forms the user will be suspended within Susanoo, being brought with it as it moves around. This connection allows Susanoo to shield against physical attacks, one that becomes more difficult to penetrate as it is manifested more fully. If it is damaged, Susanoo does not regenerate and it can only be repaired either by advancing it to the next developmental stage or by dispersing it and then forming it anew.

Although Susanoo is quite effective as a defense, it is able to distinguish in what it blocks. For example, the user can still perform jutsu while within Susanoo and the attacks will pass through it without complications. Others can be brought within Susanoo with the user's permission, and users can likewise choose to leave Susanoo's protective envelope. The latter property can be used against the user, as if an opponent can bypass Susanoo, however slightly and latch onto them, they can be pulled out of Susanoo. Susanoo is also only able to defend against physical attacks, so they are still vulnerable to visual or auditory attacks.

So long as it is active, Susanoo draws on the user's chakra in large amounts. Sasuke Uchiha describes the sensation of using Susanoo as feeling pain in every cell in his body, which only increases over time and at higher developmental stages. Being a Mangekyō Sharingan-based ability, it also places a strain on the user's eyes the more it is used.

The Susanoo is awakened when the user has the mangekyo sharingan in both eyes. Susanoo has different appearances, colors, and weapons depending on the person who has awakened the Susanoo. Susanoo also has different stages it goes through as the user develops their Susanoo (done through a training topic or several topics using the Susanoo). The user of this technique must have awakened two mangekyou sharingan techniques before this can be obtained (i.e. Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu). Also stages 1-4 have strength, speed, and durable equal to that of the users stats.

Stage 1: The Susanoo is just awakened. The users Susanoo takes the appearance of a upper skeletal structure of the Susanoo. The users can also manifest single aspects of the skeletal structure to aid them such as using manifesting the rib cage for defense or the arm to interact with their surrounding. The rib cage of the Susanoo reaches the height of 10 ft and the arm of the Susanoo in this stage is also around 10 feet.

Spoiler:

Stage 2: At this stage of the Susanoo the muscle, skin, and armor appear on the Susanoo along with two more arms, making four in total. As stated before the appearance of the Susanoo's armor depends on what the person who has awakened the jutsu. However, all fully armored Susanoo resemble yamabushi. The user can also choose to have an unarmored Susanoo or not. The Susanoo now grows to about 30 feet since the rest of the body has been manifested and the arms are now 20 feet.
Skeletal:
Spoiler:

Armored:
Spoiler:

Unarmored:
Spoiler:

Stage 3: This stage is a special stage not everyone can reach as he puts even more strain on the eye. The user can now have their spiritual weapon manifest, the weapon varies from user to user. (These weapons can only be used while using Susanoo and must be app'd in weapon registration before usage.

Stage 4 (SS): A stage that is very rare for anyone using the Susanoo. Known as the "Perfect" Susanoo the body grows a tengu like nose, wings for flight, and is clad in robes along with ornate armor. This is very rare for Susanoo users as it is slightly bigger than the tailed beast themselves and also has power comparable to those of the tailed beast or maybe even stronger. The Perfect Susanoo can easily level giant mountains or even destroy meteorites along with being able to fly by sprouting wings. This new Susanoo is about 100 meters with its arms being about 45 meters. Since this is the last and most powerful Susanoo that can actually move, the speed stat will be defined by the users speed stats while power and durability will be undefined.

Spoiler:

Requirements ;; Regular Susano'o: Mangekyo Sharingan, Perfect Susano'o: Eternal Mangekyo. Ninjutsu as a dominate spec.

Wordcount ;; stages 1-3: 2,000 for each stage. Stage 4: 3,000


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Karumo

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Re: Susanoo

Post by Karumo on Wed Jan 20, 2016 3:42 pm

1. Go through and give the Susanoo a size at each section. Ie, for stage one how big is the ribcage (height and width?) and how long the arm is
2. When you mention awakened in both eyes, write it along the eyes that the powers of each eye have been awakened, it will grant a third power (that being Susanoo in this case)
3. On stage 3, let's not add the bottom half until perfect? Instead maybe say this is the stage where they gain/can use any spiritual weapons. Like Sasuke could use his bow, Itachi the totsuke blade and Yata mirror, Madara had the 4 arms/swords.
4. Any chance including a spoiler at each level as a reference for what the Susano'o would look like at each point?
5. In the requirements, let's include needing ninjutsu as a dominant spec
6. Let's write in, perhaps above the stages (maybe along with where you detail movement) that the susanoo will move at the speed stat, and physical power as well as durability is derived from the power stat?
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Re: Susanoo

Post by Karumo on Fri Jan 22, 2016 5:36 pm

1. Stage 2 could stand to be a little taller, but arm length is fine. For the perfect, 120 meters is a bit tall, let's bring it down to 100? And it's arms down to like 40 meters? (Just for proportions sake, having arms that go to your knees is a bit weird) Or to whatever distance makes more sense I suppose...
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3. Something to add that I just thought about, a sort of OOC addendum, that any spiritual weapons can only be used with the Susanoo and must be app'd in the weapon registration and all before they can use them
4. I like the pictures and all, but some of them are huge and stretch the page a significant amount, any chance you could resize those?
5. --
6. In it you mention that the Susanoo increase the users stats, however, it's more that the Susanoo itself has the new stats (being the users chakra for both speed/strength). However for perfect, it gains SS rank power, so let's cut that tidbit out at each part for each stage and instead say something earlier on like Stages 1-3 the Susanoo will have a speed/strength/durability equal to the users chakra (since 5 and 5) and the perfect Susanoo will have a speed equal to the user's chakra with strength/durability being undefined?
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Karumo

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Re: Susanoo

Post by Karumo on Fri Jan 22, 2016 6:12 pm

Indra wrote:Name ;; Susano'o 
Rank ;; S(SS)
Type ;; Ninjutsu
Element ;; N/A
Range ;; Self
Power ;; 5(-)
Speed ;; 5(5)
Cool Down;; 10
Description ;;

Spoiler:
When activated, Susanoo forms around the user and becomes an extension of their will, acting and attacking on their behalf. By default, Susanoo is anchored to its user and they to it: in its less developed forms it will move around with the user; in its more completed forms the user will be suspended within Susanoo, being brought with it as it moves around. This connection allows Susanoo to shield against physical attacks, one that becomes more difficult to penetrate as it is manifested more fully. If it is damaged, Susanoo does not regenerate and it can only be repaired either by advancing it to the next developmental stage or by dispersing it and then forming it anew.

Although Susanoo is quite effective as a defense, it is able to distinguish in what it blocks. For example, the user can still perform jutsu while within Susanoo and the attacks will pass through it without complications. Others can be brought within Susanoo with the user's permission, and users can likewise choose to leave Susanoo's protective envelope. The latter property can be used against the user, as if an opponent can bypass Susanoo, however slightly and latch onto them, they can be pulled out of Susanoo. Susanoo is also only able to defend against physical attacks, so they are still vulnerable to visual or auditory attacks.

So long as it is active, Susanoo draws on the user's chakra in large amounts. Sasuke Uchiha describes the sensation of using Susanoo as feeling pain in every cell in his body, which only increases over time and at higher developmental stages. Being a Mangekyō Sharingan-based ability, it also places a strain on the user's eyes the more it is used.

The Susanoo is awakened when the user has the mangekyo sharingan in both eyes. Susanoo has different appearances, colors, and weapons depending on the person who has awakened the Susanoo. Susanoo also has different stages it goes through as the user develops their Susanoo (done through a training topic or several topics using the Susanoo). The user of this technique must have awakened two mangekyou sharingan techniques before this can be obtained (i.e. Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu). Also stages 1-4 have strength, speed, and durable equal to that of the users stats.

Stage 1: The Susanoo is just awakened. The users Susanoo takes the appearance of a upper skeletal structure of the Susanoo. The users can also manifest single aspects of the skeletal structure to aid them such as using manifesting the rib cage for defense or the arm to interact with their surrounding. The rib cage of the Susanoo reaches the height of 10 ft and the arm of the Susanoo in this stage is also around 10 feet.

Spoiler:

Stage 2: At this stage of the Susanoo the muscle, skin, and armor appear on the Susanoo along with two more arms, making four in total. As stated before the appearance of the Susanoo's armor depends on what the person who has awakened the jutsu. However, all fully armored Susanoo resemble yamabushi. The user can also choose to have an unarmored Susanoo or not. The Susanoo now grows to about 30 feet since the rest of the body has been manifested and the arms are now 20 feet.
Skeletal:
Spoiler:

Armored:
Spoiler:

Unarmored:
Spoiler:

Stage 3: This stage is a special stage not everyone can reach as he puts even more strain on the eye. The user can now have their spiritual weapon manifest, the weapon varies from user to user. (These weapons can only be used while using Susanoo and must be app'd in weapon registration before usage.

Stage 4 (SS): A stage that is very rare for anyone using the Susanoo. Known as the "Perfect" Susanoo the body grows a tengu like nose, wings for flight, and is clad in robes along with ornate armor. This is very rare for Susanoo users as it is slightly bigger than the tailed beast themselves and also has power comparable to those of the tailed beast or maybe even stronger. The Perfect Susanoo can easily level giant mountains or even destroy meteorites along with being able to fly by sprouting wings. This new Susanoo is about 100 meters with its arms being about 45 meters. Since this is the last and most powerful Susanoo that can actually move, the speed stat will be defined by the users speed stats while power and durability will be undefined.

Spoiler:

Requirements ;; Regular Susano'o: Mangekyo Sharingan, Perfect Susano'o: Eternal Mangekyo. Ninjutsu as a dominate spec.

Wordcount ;; stages 1-3: 2,000 for each stage. Stage 4: 3,000

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