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Uchiha Flame Formation [cannon]

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Kashi※

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Uchiha Flame Formation [cannon]

Post by Kashi※ on Sun Nov 29, 2015 8:12 pm



Name ;; Uchiha Flame Formation
Rank ;; B-Rank
Type ;; ninjutsu
Element ;; Fire
Range ;; With the user as a radius it expands to 15 meters and is high as 50 feet (15 meters high).
Power ;; 3
Speed ;; 3
Cool Down;; 6 post
Description ;; After manifesting small chakra flames on each finger of one hand, the user then slams their palm on the ground, resulting in the creation of a cylindrical barrier enveloping a location of their choosing, protecting anything contained within and burning whatever comes into contact with the barrier's exterior.
Requirements ;; Must be an Uchiha and have Fire Release as well as Ninjutsu.
Wordcount ;;750 words



Last edited by Kami on Tue Dec 01, 2015 4:58 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Karumo

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Re: Uchiha Flame Formation [cannon]

Post by Karumo on Mon Nov 30, 2015 11:43 pm

-font coding is broken
-Ranges need to be defined
-Up the cooldown by a post or two
-How big is the cylinder, how tall is it? And is it open on top or totally sealed?
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Kashi※

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Re: Uchiha Flame Formation [cannon]

Post by Kashi※ on Tue Dec 01, 2015 4:47 pm

Edited
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Re: Uchiha Flame Formation [cannon]

Post by .Shinigai Kaguya on Tue Dec 01, 2015 4:54 pm

Convert feet to meters
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Kashi※

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Re: Uchiha Flame Formation [cannon]

Post by Kashi※ on Tue Dec 01, 2015 4:59 pm

done
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Re: Uchiha Flame Formation [cannon]

Post by .Shinigai Kaguya on Tue Dec 01, 2015 10:23 pm

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