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Kay

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Rasengan

Post by Kay on Sun Nov 29, 2015 7:13 pm



Name ;; Rasengan
Rank ;; A Rank
Type ;; ninjutsu
Element ;; Elementless
Range ;;
Power ;; 4
Speed ;; 4
Cool Down;; 3 posts
Description ;;

"The Rasengan does not require any hand seals to use, relying only on the chakra control of the user. Once it is complete, it becomes self-sustaining, which does not give the Rasengan a definite limit like its counterpart, the Chidori. The compacted nature and moving speed of the chakra allows the Rasengan to grind into whatever it comes in contact with to inflict major damage. This tends to launch the target spiralling backward after being hit or, if the target is lying on or being launched to the ground, the destructive force is enough to form a crater."
Rasengan:

As you can see the dimension of the rasengan is slightly bigger than a ninja's hand about 6 inches at all diameters.The rashengan can't be throw and takes no hand signs, HOWEVER the jutsu has a 1 post duration, the jutsu may create a crater of about twelve feet wide in a circular motion and five feet deep.To inflict damage upon the enemy the Rasengan must touch the enemy's body.
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Last edited by Kashen on Sun Dec 27, 2015 2:03 pm; edited 6 times in total
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Karumo

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Re: Rasengan

Post by Karumo on Mon Nov 30, 2015 11:13 pm

-Cut out the tidbit under 'rank' that got left behind
-I'd prefer to change range to something along the lines of Direct Contact rather than reach also,
-Cut out the (Atleast not yet) for throwing it, the basic rasengan wasn't meant to be thrown
-Lastly, there was no wind ninjutsu for rasengan, only rasenshuriken, so cut that out also then you should be good~
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Re: Rasengan

Post by Kay on Thu Dec 24, 2015 10:01 am

Edited
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Re: Rasengan

Post by Sho on Sat Dec 26, 2015 1:08 am

Change the range to be blank since it can't be thrown, if the rasengan is self sustaining, it'll last until it makes contact with something.
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Re: Rasengan

Post by Kay on Sun Dec 27, 2015 9:59 am

Fixed
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Re: Rasengan

Post by Karumo on Sun Dec 27, 2015 2:03 pm

Edit power/speed to be limited to 8 points for A rank jutsu and then you should be alright~
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Re: Rasengan

Post by Kay on Sun Dec 27, 2015 2:04 pm

Done
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Re: Rasengan

Post by Sho on Sun Dec 27, 2015 2:16 pm

Kashen wrote:

Name ;; Rasengan
Rank ;; A Rank
Type ;; ninjutsu
Element ;; Elementless
Range ;;
Power ;; 4
Speed ;; 4
Cool Down;; 3 posts
Description ;;

"The Rasengan does not require any hand seals to use, relying only on the chakra control of the user. Once it is complete, it becomes self-sustaining, which does not give the Rasengan a definite limit like its counterpart, the Chidori. The compacted nature and moving speed of the chakra allows the Rasengan to grind into whatever it comes in contact with to inflict major damage. This tends to launch the target spiralling backward after being hit or, if the target is lying on or being launched to the ground, the destructive force is enough to form a crater."
Rasengan:

As you can see the dimension of the rasengan is slightly bigger than a ninja's hand about 6 inches at all diameters.The rashengan can't be throw and takes no hand signs, HOWEVER the jutsu has a 1 post duration, the jutsu may create a crater of about twelve feet wide in a circular motion and five feet deep.To inflict damage upon the enemy the Rasengan must touch the enemy's body.
Requirements ;;
Wordcount ;; 1.5k


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