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Karumo

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Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Karumo on Sun Nov 15, 2015 2:25 am

Name ;; Hiraishin (Flying Thunder God)
Rank ;; SS-rank
Type ;; Fuuinjutsu
Element ;; N/A
Range ;; Depends on placement of seal (potentially limitless as long as chakra is available)
Power ;; 3
Speed ;; N/A
Cool Down;; One teleportation per post
Description ;; The Flying Thunder God is a techinque that uses a form of the summoning teleportation ability to move a person/object from one spot to a seal. The user of the technique is obviously the item in question, however, the number of receiving seals is not limited. This technique can be outfitted to transmit objects and people connected to the user (usually by touch) as well, but without direct contact it can't be used to transport others.

A seal, created especially by the user using their chakra (their chakra is the agent that binds them as the object to teleport, and without possessing their unique chakra signature, they can't teleport without assistance) and placed onto nearly any location that a seal could exist on. Once the seal exists, a simple expenditure of chakra allows a person to nearly instantaneously teleport from the current location to wherever their seal is (if multiple seals are available pick one). An incredible amount of concentration is needed to maintain orientation after teleportation and with a skilled user, there would be no delay/hesitation in being able to act after the fact. Furthermore, due to needing a high concentration in order to use the jutsu, it is not practical for ninja under B-rank (Special Jounin) to use in combat or otherwise, so it can only be learned once you have reached B-rank (Spec jounin).

Counter to it, since the technique requires an incredible amount of concentration, any maintainable technique used before the transport will be ended by teleporting (excluding sage mode or bijuu chakra modes, or KKG maintained jutsu) and techniques prepared beforehand would be undone during transport. Ie, building up a fireball jutsu before teleporting in hopes to spring it on your opponent would fail, as the fireball would be lost and the chakra spent. As for the seals, it only takes a small amount of chakra to place the seal, and the majority of it to actually transport. Seals can be pre-placed on items (must be apped for) as long as the item is large enough and has enough room to place the seal (ie, not broken anywhere along the seal).
Requirements ;; The user must know Fuuinjutsu and the user must also create a unique appearance for their sealing tag that the jutsu relies on. Learned from a current FTG user and create formula in character.
Seal Appearance ;;
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Re: Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Pain on Sun Nov 15, 2015 9:14 am

OK requirements are just requirements. Like you only need Fuin spec etc etc.  How many times you can teleport you should put that in description. Once that is done I'll check back
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Re: Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Karumo on Sun Nov 15, 2015 2:39 pm

Okay, that's edited~
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Re: Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Pain on Sun Nov 15, 2015 2:41 pm

what do you mean by Skill "someone with B-rank skill would be able to teleport 5 times (in a single thread) before their concentration gives out, A-rank: teleport around 10 times, and at S-rank skill, they can teleport once per post. "
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Re: Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Karumo on Sun Nov 15, 2015 2:53 pm

By skill I almost purely mean level, so B-rank: Spec Jounin, A-rank: Jounin, S-rank, etc...

And I only add that to limit it's use by lower rank peeps, in some sort of attempt to balance it
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Re: Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Pain on Sun Nov 15, 2015 3:03 pm

So E Ranks-C Ranks can't teleport at all if so shouldn't the requirements be only B Rank Ninja and above can learn
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Re: Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Karumo on Sun Nov 15, 2015 3:13 pm

Aight, I edited it to be B-rank+ and cut out the stuff limiting its use. I figured that if anyone can learn any technique at any level, then a B-rank should be able to master it with the same proficiency, once they reach that level of course
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Re: Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Pain on Sun Nov 15, 2015 3:17 pm

Also the user doesn't use Chakra Ink to create the seal. They form it from their own chakra
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Re: Karumo's Flying Thunder God

Post by Karumo on Sun Nov 15, 2015 3:29 pm

Aight chakra ink edited out but left the item creation (hopefully intact)
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