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Sigma Uchiha

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Sharingan: Quick Step

Post by Sigma Uchiha on Tue Apr 19, 2016 9:19 pm

• name ;; Sharingan: Quick Step
• rank ;; B-Ranked
• type ;; Ninjutsu
• element ;; Non-Elemental
• range ;; 20 Meters or less
• power ;; 0 - Does no Damage by itself
• speed ;; 5
• cool down;; 3 posts
• duration; 1 post, happens in an instant
• description ;; This is a technique created by Sigma Uchiha, using his three tomoe sharingan he is able to pick a spot with in his sight up to 20 meters away and travel to it. During this time he is able to move to that location at nigh-untraceable speeds, the jutsu works by using chakra to increase the ninjas natural movement speed (by the amount of chakra that the jutsu uses from the speed stat specifically). The jutsu can be used as a way to quick attack an enemy or it can be used to escape from enemies. The jutsu requires at least the three tomoe sharingan and to be taught by Sigma.


Last edited by Sigma Uchiha on Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:04 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Sigma Uchiha

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Re: Sharingan: Quick Step

Post by Sigma Uchiha on Wed Apr 20, 2016 1:28 pm

Bump, Completed it
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Sigma Uchiha

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Re: Sharingan: Quick Step

Post by Sigma Uchiha on Thu Apr 21, 2016 5:33 pm

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Re: Sharingan: Quick Step

Post by Sigma Uchiha on Fri Apr 22, 2016 2:25 pm

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Karumo

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Re: Sharingan: Quick Step

Post by Karumo on Sat Apr 23, 2016 1:33 pm

Alright, for the range, just put 20 meters, it's understood that it's a cap.

As for the jutsu itself, I don't know that I like a 20 meter 'teleportation' jutsu that isn't using space time ninjutsu. Especially at a B rank, FTG is SS rank if that can be of any comparison. The description also describes this working similar in mechanism to the body flicker technique, just beefed up, if that's fair to say. And if that's the case, then the speed will be equal to the value of the speed stat, and not nigh untraceable speeds as stated.

I would up the rank, give it more of a trigger than merely sighting the object/area to move to (unless you want to make this one of your MS techs down the line?) And make the edit to the description and mechanic of it...

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