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Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by Order on Sun Feb 14, 2016 6:38 am



• Name ;; Mayfly Technique (Limited)
• Rank ;; SS-Rank
• Type ;; Nin
• Element ;; Wood
• Range ;; N/A
• Power ;; 5
• Speed ;; --
• Cool Down;; 6 posts
• Description ;; It allows the user to merge their body with the ground and flora and travel at remarkable speeds. While using the underground network of organic matter, consisting of things like plant roots, tree trunks and their branches, and water veins, they can travel everywhere with nearly immeasurable speed. Once merged with any sort of living organic plant life the user's presence is completely concealed, making it impossible to be detected even through means of advanced doujutsu such as the Byakugan. In order to remain undetected the user may only expose their head and their shoulders, while the rest of their body must remain merged with the plant network. So long as they remain so merged with the plant network they may also move through the plants with a bonus to their speed of 140.

If the user chooses to attack while they are merged with the plant network, they will need to disassociate themselves with the plant network they are merged with. This exposes them once more to being detected through sensory means like any other shinobi, removes the speed bonus, and places this jutsu on its cool down. The user may still use supplemental, self targeting jutsu in this state without ending Mayfly or putting it on cool down, however they are detectable while they cast the jutsu. So long as the user remains merged with their plant network this jutsu has no predefined duration, and may last for an entire topic.
• Requirements ;; Senju blood, claimed on limited


Last edited by Order on Thu Feb 25, 2016 4:40 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Re: Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by Kaos on Mon Feb 15, 2016 8:24 am

bumped
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Re: Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by Saya on Wed Feb 17, 2016 1:04 am

I will need you to quantify the speeds at which mayfly users travel through their plant network from one place to another. Likewise, please remove the [2] footnote, as it links to nothing. Please clean up some of the grammar on this jutsu as well, just give it a quick proof reading. Also, please note that this is [canon] in the topic title.
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Re: Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by Kaos on Sun Feb 21, 2016 5:50 am

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Re: Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by Kaos on Tue Feb 23, 2016 1:43 pm

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Re: Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by .Shinigai Kaguya on Tue Feb 23, 2016 1:49 pm

Okay so this should be SS rank if it has no Power. How far can you travel before coming back up?? I also need a cooldown.

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Re: Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by Order on Tue Feb 23, 2016 2:06 pm

made edits to it

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Re: Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by Order on Tue Feb 23, 2016 2:07 pm

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Re: Mayfly (Limited) Canon

Post by Esha on Thu Feb 25, 2016 4:45 pm

Spoiler:
• Name ;; Mayfly Technique (Limited)
• Rank ;; SS-Rank
• Type ;; Nin
• Element ;; Wood
• Range ;; N/A
• Power ;; 5
• Speed ;; --
• Cool Down;; 6 posts
• Description ;; It allows the user to merge their body with the ground and flora and travel at remarkable speeds. While using the underground network of organic matter, consisting of things like plant roots, tree trunks and their branches, and water veins, they can travel everywhere with nearly immeasurable speed. Once merged with any sort of living organic plant life the user's presence is completely concealed, making it impossible to be detected even through means of advanced doujutsu such as the Byakugan. In order to remain undetected the user may only expose their head and their shoulders, while the rest of their body must remain merged with the plant network. So long as they remain so merged with the plant network they may also move through the plants with a bonus to their speed of 140.

If the user chooses to attack while they are merged with the plant network, they will need to disassociate themselves with the plant network they are merged with. This exposes them once more to being detected through sensory means like any other shinobi, removes the speed bonus, and places this jutsu on its cool down. The user may still use supplemental, self targeting jutsu in this state without ending Mayfly or putting it on cool down, however they are detectable while they cast the jutsu. So long as the user remains merged with their plant network this jutsu has no predefined duration, and may last for an entire topic.
• Requirements ;; Senju blood, claimed on limited

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